Seeing as how I have never started a thread, I figure I should the make the first one count. Please give me advice/opinions on my statement. Thanks. I hope it isn't to "mushy"....
The opportunity to lead is a highly demanding and rewarding position granted only to a few select individuals. These individuals must have the strength in not only delegating responsibilities, but must be able to lead as an example. Over the past six years I have worked to better strengthen myself as a leader, so that one day I may lead men and women in the United States Navy.
I had my first taste of leadership while working in the restaurant business. I acquired the position of general manager and led crewmembers to fulfill the company’s operational objectives. In the beginning, I learned that just giving orders does not make a solid leader, and that an efficient leader leads by example. From hiring new staff and completing paperwork, to cleaning the dishes, there was not a job I would not do. As manager I would set the bar believing you are only as good as your worst man. I would make sure my crew met the standards of my store, and exceeded the standards of the other stores within the company. Because of my ability to lead as an example my crew had high moral, transforming our store into a model for the region.
While completing the remaining years of my college education, I met my wife who was raised in the Navy. Through her family I learned of the customs and traditions the Navy upholds. On our honeymoon we traveled to Hawaii where we visited Pearl Harbor. That day I gained a feeling of pride and patriotism for our nation that was stronger than ever. After experiencing the sacrifice and courage of those men who fought gallantly and died honorably that December morning, I knew that in my heart I wanted to become a part of the Navy’s proud heritage and serve my country.
Given the honor to receive a commission in the United States Navy will give me the challenges of leadership to further strengthen myself both mentally and physically while proudly defending my country. In return the Navy will gain a person dedicated to the role of leadership who will set the bar for his crew, and who completes the goals given with Honor, Courage and Commitment. I hope to one day join the other men and women who proudly uphold the traditions and power of the United States Navy.
The opportunity to lead is a highly demanding and rewarding position granted only to a few select individuals. These individuals must have the strength in not only delegating responsibilities, but must be able to lead as an example. Over the past six years I have worked to better strengthen myself as a leader, so that one day I may lead men and women in the United States Navy.
I had my first taste of leadership while working in the restaurant business. I acquired the position of general manager and led crewmembers to fulfill the company’s operational objectives. In the beginning, I learned that just giving orders does not make a solid leader, and that an efficient leader leads by example. From hiring new staff and completing paperwork, to cleaning the dishes, there was not a job I would not do. As manager I would set the bar believing you are only as good as your worst man. I would make sure my crew met the standards of my store, and exceeded the standards of the other stores within the company. Because of my ability to lead as an example my crew had high moral, transforming our store into a model for the region.
While completing the remaining years of my college education, I met my wife who was raised in the Navy. Through her family I learned of the customs and traditions the Navy upholds. On our honeymoon we traveled to Hawaii where we visited Pearl Harbor. That day I gained a feeling of pride and patriotism for our nation that was stronger than ever. After experiencing the sacrifice and courage of those men who fought gallantly and died honorably that December morning, I knew that in my heart I wanted to become a part of the Navy’s proud heritage and serve my country.
Given the honor to receive a commission in the United States Navy will give me the challenges of leadership to further strengthen myself both mentally and physically while proudly defending my country. In return the Navy will gain a person dedicated to the role of leadership who will set the bar for his crew, and who completes the goals given with Honor, Courage and Commitment. I hope to one day join the other men and women who proudly uphold the traditions and power of the United States Navy.
