I plan to submit my first package on 1 October 2007. First, I would like to get the thoughts and recommendations from the members in this forum. There is a plethora of knowledge on this site and I would like to use it to my fullest potential. Here is what I have to submit......
Applying for:
1) Pilot 2) NFO 3) IWO
Age: 26
8 years of active duty Service - FT2(SS)
Hold TS/SCI Clearance
Awards:
2 LOC's
2 Good Conducts
Collateral Duties:
Command Recreation Committee President
Command Fitness Leader
Community Involvement:
Play in a Top Gun flag football League
Volunteer to help the coordination and completion of San Diego’s Bay Bridge Fun run
Volunteer to help the coordination and completion of San Diego’s Academic Decathlon
Volunteer to Mentor young kids at Pebbles Pathway, a childcare for my local Church
PRT:
Last 3 were Outstanding Low
Statement:
In short I stated that being a Naval Officer is my #1 goal and I will not be discouraged nor give up.
Eval:
Last 3 Evals are EP
(Last 2 were #1 of 11 E-5)
OAR:
Take on Sept 24
Education:
Earned both from University of Phoenix-
BS Degree in Information Technology
GPA: 3.5
AA Computer Science Technologies
GPA: 3.3
CO's Recommendations (2):
First, Hand written from previous Commodore (O-6)
Second, Personally typed from current Commodore (O-6) who stated I was the best applicant he has reviewed in his 25 year career.
-Both are extremely heavy write-ups
Interviews:
3 Submarine O-5
1 NFO O-6 (Current Chief of Staff for Navy Region SW)
1 Pilot O-5 (Current CO of a Helicopter Squadron)
1 IW O-5
-All have 10's w/excellent write ups
LOR:
1 Submarine O-6 (my previous CO)
1 Joint Staff O-6 (my previous Commodore)
1 NC O-5 (My Father-in-Law)
1 CWO3 (My command's SSO who is an IW)
1 E-9 (CMC for COMSUBGRU 7)
-All great write-ups
Additional Info:
Had CO's NJP in 2003 - Article 132
One of my LOR is from the CO who masted me
Both my previous CO and current Commodore discuss the NJP and how much I have learned from it.
All Evals since have been EP except the one immediately after, which was an MP
I also wrote an NJP address discussing the situation and how I have learned from it.
Any thoughts (even constructive criticism) and recommendation will help .
Applying for:
1) Pilot 2) NFO 3) IWO
Age: 26
8 years of active duty Service - FT2(SS)
Hold TS/SCI Clearance
Awards:
2 LOC's
2 Good Conducts
Collateral Duties:
Command Recreation Committee President
Command Fitness Leader
Community Involvement:
Play in a Top Gun flag football League
Volunteer to help the coordination and completion of San Diego’s Bay Bridge Fun run
Volunteer to help the coordination and completion of San Diego’s Academic Decathlon
Volunteer to Mentor young kids at Pebbles Pathway, a childcare for my local Church
PRT:
Last 3 were Outstanding Low
Statement:
In short I stated that being a Naval Officer is my #1 goal and I will not be discouraged nor give up.
Eval:
Last 3 Evals are EP
(Last 2 were #1 of 11 E-5)
OAR:
Take on Sept 24
Education:
Earned both from University of Phoenix-
BS Degree in Information Technology
GPA: 3.5
AA Computer Science Technologies
GPA: 3.3
CO's Recommendations (2):
First, Hand written from previous Commodore (O-6)
Second, Personally typed from current Commodore (O-6) who stated I was the best applicant he has reviewed in his 25 year career.
-Both are extremely heavy write-ups
Interviews:
3 Submarine O-5
1 NFO O-6 (Current Chief of Staff for Navy Region SW)
1 Pilot O-5 (Current CO of a Helicopter Squadron)
1 IW O-5
-All have 10's w/excellent write ups
LOR:
1 Submarine O-6 (my previous CO)
1 Joint Staff O-6 (my previous Commodore)
1 NC O-5 (My Father-in-Law)
1 CWO3 (My command's SSO who is an IW)
1 E-9 (CMC for COMSUBGRU 7)
-All great write-ups
Additional Info:
Had CO's NJP in 2003 - Article 132
One of my LOR is from the CO who masted me
Both my previous CO and current Commodore discuss the NJP and how much I have learned from it.
All Evals since have been EP except the one immediately after, which was an MP
I also wrote an NJP address discussing the situation and how I have learned from it.
Any thoughts (even constructive criticism) and recommendation will help .
