originalbigjim
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I have started writing my essays and I was wondering what other people have put that got picked up, anyone willing to share?
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There is a plethora of stuff about this already posted, complete with various examples of other people's work. Search away.
Brett
Best advice I got (I haven't been picked up yet, however) was to write about two things:
1) Why you want to join the Navy (why the Navy will be good for you)
2) What you have to offer (why you will be good for the Navy)
Being specific and relating your life experiences to these two topics is probably what will distinguish a dry, idealistic essay from a personal, concise statement of purpose.
Of course, take my advice with a grain of salt, it's just a suggestion.
1) Why you want to join the Navy (why the Navy will be good for you)
2) What you have to offer (why you will be good for the Navy)
Being specific and relating your life experiences to these two topics is probably what will distinguish a dry, idealistic essay from a personal, concise statement of purpose.
Of course, take my advice with a grain of salt, it's just a suggestion.