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Motivational Statement Feedback

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Alej.b

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I’ve written three versions of my Motivational Statement — they’re similar but each with a slightly different angle. I’d really appreciate your honest feedback. Which one stands out the most? What can I improve? Last thing I need for my package
 

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FormerRecruitingGuru

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Alej.b said:
I’ve written three versions of my Motivational Statement — they’re similar but each with a slightly different angle. I’d really appreciate your honest feedback. Which one stands out the most? What can I improve? Last thing I need for my package
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First and foremost, welcome to the forum.

Second, there’s already a combined forum for folks to browse, share and ask feedback on their motivational statements.

Motivational Statement MEGA Thread

I've been trying to write my motivational statement for a couple hours now, and I am finally finished with my rough draft. I've read some posts where you guys gave some great feedback to some other statements.... so anyway whadaya think? And by the way, I am TERRIBLE at expressing...
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I would suggest going through some recent posts there to help baseline yours.

Lastly, use the search function or resources first before asking something that’s likely been asked and answered before. Good luck.
 
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