Motivational Statement

[new_recruit]

Hello everyone,

I'm getting ready to re-submit my package and wanted to tweak my motivational statement a little bit. I’m looking at it now and it’s a little bland. Anyone have some good advise? Thanks!

 

[annaisdivine]

Hello everyone,

I'm getting ready to re-submit my package and wanted to tweak my motivational statement a little bit. I’m looking at it now and it’s a little bland. Anyone have some good advise? Thanks!

Spell check.

 

[girard55]

Spell check.

lol...good ADVICE

 

[new_recruit]

I did! Lousy microswipe word spellcheck.

 

[Nose]

Advise is a word and you spelled it correctly.

Don't spellcheck, PROOFREAD.

 

[FLYTPAY]

Do a search for motivational statement and advice.....I am sure there have been at least 15 this year on here.

 

[jburnes]

Here's what my recruiter told me:

"please add additional information on what you can do for the Navy and its Sailor's and also what it can do for you."

 

[jus2mch]

Here's what my recruiter told me:

"please add additional information on what you can do for the Navy and its Sailor's and also what it can do for you."

So did you do what he told you, or are you still working on it?

 

[jburnes]

I had to rewrite mine, but I finished. My package has been sent up and I am hoping will be reviewed by the Nov board. I'm trying to get in as a nurse which is totally unrelated to this board, but I love reading all the posts here!

 

[cyristvirus]

I am not even going to get into this fight again by suggestions on how to help your paper. I would have to agree with all the other members when they say your personal statement is personal. Good luck to you.

 

[HH-60H]

Do a search for motivational statement and advice.....I am sure there have been at least 15 this year on here.

I agree with FLYTPAY, there are plenty of threads on this subject. There is no need to beat this dead horse again.