i am currently in a predicament and need some help quick. a few officer agreed to give me a board early due to me transferring in december. so in order to get a board in line to get a few recommendation from my current command i have to get my sta-21 package started so i have something to show to the board members. i only have a few weeks to get this done in order to turn over to a few o-5's to proof read. i am currently trying to get started on my personal statement but it seems like everytime i come up with something i end up changing my mind. i have plenty of things to write about i just cant seem to get them together right. please is there anyone out there that could possibly show me an example of a successful personal statement it would be greatly appreciated.