ghost. I sent my package off around April 12, 2002 and received news back 4 days later that I had been accepted to OCS for a Sep 15, 2002 date. Lucky, no, not lucky, blessed! Of course I worked my tail off. Anyways, besides the point. My motivational statement was kick butt. Some say that this is the first thing the board sees and it is important. I wrote draft after draft, let others read it and give suggestions back. It was only about 1 paragraph, but it took me like a month to get it perfect. I think it should reflect you and why you want to be an officer in the USN. Here is part of mine to give you an idea...
"Trust, Honor, Commitment, Family and Discipline all resemble similiar attributs that have to deal with the life of Matthew Curtis Thien. The essence of my heart lies within the above five words. TRUST is the backbone to my existence. HONOR is what I dream of. COMMITMENT brings results. FAMILY is support, and DISCIPLINE, for without, nothing is gained. This is what makes me, Matthew Curtis Thien, tick as a person, as an American, as a husband and as a person trust worthy of other's lives. This is why I want to be a United States Naval Aviator."
Hope this helps a bit. Spend some time on this making sure it really reflects what you feel and believe.
Take Care,
Matt
PS Be thinking of me as I start OCS in 4 days. You will be there soon if its what you want. The NAVY will reward your persistence, after all, that's what it takes to make it through anything in life...PERSISTENCE!
Get it DONE