My NROTC ESSAY... any feedback please
Discuss your reasons for wanting to become a Naval Officer.
Ever since I was a young child I have always looked up to the men and woman in uniform, and heroes in general. Each and every day I wake up and turn on the news and learn of a fallen hero who has died in the days past, and these tragedy's inspire me to do great things in this world and help the lives of other human beings. As I have grown, I have realized that the Navy is made up of class and Sailors with integrity with the desire to make things better in these harsh times. The Navy has inspired me to do better as well, I would love to join not only a military branch, but a family of heroes who want to make a change in the world, and there is nothing better than serving my beloved country in The United States Navy. By joining the United States Navy I will be able to learn values and leadership qualities that will benefit me for the rest of my life and I will be able to pass them down from generation to generation. It would be a great privilege to be able to lead Sailors in the United States Navy as an Officer. It is a great deal to become a Navy Officer, and the job requires hard work and leadership to get the job done and correctly, this provides a challenge for me to step up and lead and fill the shoes of Past Naval Officers. Through out the years as being a United States Naval Sea Cadet I have learned three great values to go by. Honor, Courage and Commitment. These three great values have helped live my life as a great citizen and help me influence the lives of many people and be a mentor. And most of all I would carry these three core values over to the Navy with me to change the live of many people. I am very proud of my Naval heritage, and I would love to be an Officer who continues carries on the tradition. While I strive to be the best I can be, I want to be push my self forward, as far as possible. Being a United States Naval Officer would allow me to accomplish my goal.
Discuss your reasons for wanting to become a Naval Officer.
Ever since I was a young child I have always looked up to the men and woman in uniform, and heroes in general. Each and every day I wake up and turn on the news and learn of a fallen hero who has died in the days past, and these tragedy's inspire me to do great things in this world and help the lives of other human beings. As I have grown, I have realized that the Navy is made up of class and Sailors with integrity with the desire to make things better in these harsh times. The Navy has inspired me to do better as well, I would love to join not only a military branch, but a family of heroes who want to make a change in the world, and there is nothing better than serving my beloved country in The United States Navy. By joining the United States Navy I will be able to learn values and leadership qualities that will benefit me for the rest of my life and I will be able to pass them down from generation to generation. It would be a great privilege to be able to lead Sailors in the United States Navy as an Officer. It is a great deal to become a Navy Officer, and the job requires hard work and leadership to get the job done and correctly, this provides a challenge for me to step up and lead and fill the shoes of Past Naval Officers. Through out the years as being a United States Naval Sea Cadet I have learned three great values to go by. Honor, Courage and Commitment. These three great values have helped live my life as a great citizen and help me influence the lives of many people and be a mentor. And most of all I would carry these three core values over to the Navy with me to change the live of many people. I am very proud of my Naval heritage, and I would love to be an Officer who continues carries on the tradition. While I strive to be the best I can be, I want to be push my self forward, as far as possible. Being a United States Naval Officer would allow me to accomplish my goal.
