STA-21 Personal Statement Help

[Popmaliboo22]

Good Morning All,

I would like some help reviewing my STA-21 personal statement. It has been send around my command and reviewed by many and this is my creation using their advice. I think it sounds too "AI" although the only AI used was for a grammar check. Besides it sounding incredibly professional after being "dumbed" down the statement looks pretty good to me. Please give it a review. I will accept any feedback graciously! 😁

 

[ea6bflyr]

I moved your new thread to the Enlisted Commissioning Programs sub. Additionally, there's all kind of motivational statements and feedback here.