Cate said:
The metaphor was just to point out that the entire region has been wallowing in particular unrest for weeks now...
I'm no journalist (hell, I'm just a dumb jarhead with a Phys Ed degree), but when I read it the first time, I believed your comparison to be more of a
simile than a
metaphor. However, I wasn't 100% sure (it's been a long, long time since my 8th grade grammar classes in my New Jersey public school), so (like any
responsible journalist would) I verified my information before I published it.
...blaming the riots on Newsweek is like standing in a front yard soaked with gasoline and then pointing a finger at the guy who walked by with a lit cigarette.
Here's what my good friends Merriam and Webster (circa 2000) had to say about it:
*Simile: comparison. a figure of spech comparing two unlike things that is often introduced by
like or
as (
as in cheeks like roses)
*Metaphor: a figure of speech in which a word or phrase literally denoting one kind of object or idea is used in place of another to suggest a likeness or analogy between them (as in
drowning in money)
It appears that your comparison fits the definition of "simile." Perhaps if you had said something along the lines of, "the rioters were a yard soaked with gasoline, so don't point the finger at Newsweek for walking by with a lit cigarette..." it would have been a metaphor.
But, like I said, I am not a responsible journalist...I am a dumb Jarhead with a Phys Ed degree.
(Just having fun with you, Cate - you know we like you
)
p.s. - I love metaphors. I think they are like, you know, SOOOO much more clever than, like, similes