Hello! I'm applying for SWO at the next board, and I'd really appreciate it if someone could review my motivational statement. Thanks!
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My decision to apply to become a Naval Officer is motivated by a simple reason: people. I enjoy serving and helping others, ideally in a meaningful organization that can make a real difference in the lives of others. A career serving my country in the U.S Navy as a Surface Warfare Officer would be an incredible honor and would provide a unique opportunity to use the leadership, communication, and decision-making skills that I have developed in a dynamic environment soon after commissioning.
During my high school and collegiate years, I have grown the most as a person in my leadership abilities. As a lifeguard, I was on the front lines ensuring the safety of the public, and reacting to emergencies, particularly in stressful situations, including but not limited to active drownings, medical emergencies, and severe weather emergencies. When I was promoted to Pool Director, my responsibilities shifted, requiring me to focus more on the big picture with oversight from central management. I had a significant responsibility to manage, schedule, and train a division of approximately 20-30 staff members while also ensuring daily operations ran smoothly and coordinating with my colleagues at other locations. For example, one day I was dealing with something as mundane as filling out discipline paperwork for an employee who missed a shift. The next day, I had to handle a situation where someone had drowned in the pool overnight, and I had to coordinate with my team, local emergency services, and my superiors to ensure a swift response was rendered.
As a Resident Assistant, my role focused primarily on people. As the student supervising a wing of 40 students, it was imperative to get to know each of them personally to ensure their well-being in the student dormitory halls. Ensuring that any needs or concerns were taken care of was paramount to being successful at the job. Examples of this ranged from bringing quarantined residents’ food to dealing with more serious situations, such as when one of my residents attempted to commit suicide and I had to act quickly to get my supervisor and the police involved to help resolve the situation.
My tenures as the President of my University Triathlon and Nordic Skiing teams have given me experience in developing relationships as the head of two club sports organizations. I was responsible for not only managing the clubs from an administrative standpoint but also on a day-to-day basis with things such as recruitment, leading practices, and planning events & travel which were important to sure that we could not only have successful seasons but develop the next generation of leaders for those clubs.
From an education standpoint, my academic career has prepared me to develop my analytical skills and oral & written communication abilities to an advanced level, allowing me to communicate effectively with peers and superiors. Despite the difficulties that COVID posed, I worked hard to complete most of my degree in 3.5 years, and I spent my final semester as a Teaching Assistant working with a group of students in a unique class called Distance Running & Fitness to help them train for a half or full marathon both physically and mentally. Seeing the students I helped realize their goals at the marathon is a time of my life that I will look back on as one of my highlights as a leader.
Overall, I believe my experiences have shaped my ability to be an effective U.S Navy SWO and do my part in ensuring the safety of the United States. Thank you for your time, and consideration.