Gabriel Rodriguez
New Member
Hello eveyone,
This isnt a motivational statement for a STA-21 package, however I couldn't find a thread for OCS package personal statements. I have been periodically working on these statements for a couple months now and I would really appreciate some feedback and critiques. Please do not hold back.
I am applying for the Air Vehicle Pilot (7371) program this June.
PERSONAL STATEMENTS
1. For all applicants, including Nurse Corps, use the space provided to describe the following in detail (Limit your statement for each section below to between 200 and 250 words).:
As a second-generation sailor, my life has been shaped by the values and principles that define the U.S. Navy. My father served a career as a SEABEE, and from him I have learned that the strongest leaders are tenacious in the face of adversity, uphold ethical standards, encourage innovation, and prioritize both personal development and the growth of others. I used these principles as an enlisted Sailor, and I can say with utmost certainty that it's the reason for my success in life. A commission will allow me to serve this country at my highest capacity, and to build leaders within the Naval Enterprise.
My personal goal is to provide the best possible life and security for my family, and to continue my educational career as a life-long learner. Professionally, I want the challenge and opportunity to shape the future of naval warfare as an Air Vehicle Pilot. I intend to strengthen the Navy's war fighting capabilities by employing Naval Doctrine and ensuring our continued dominance on the global stage.
The skills I have gained in ten years as an enlisted Sailor will undoubtedly translate into my success as an Air Vehicle Pilot, and as a Warrant Officer. I demonstrate sustained superior performance as a leader, mentor, and as a technical expert as evidenced by my meritorious promotion to FCPO against 119 highly competitive Sailors. I approach every responsibility with a sense of duty, and I will work relentlessly to ensure the success of the Navy and my fellow Shipmates.
2. Discuss what the Navy's Core Values (Honor, Courage, Commitment) mean to you and how you think they will apply to you as an officer in the U.S. Navy.
Honor, Courage and Commitment are the foundation of what it means to be a Sailor - without any of these founding principles, no one can have a successful career as a Naval Officer. They are the ideals we strive to live up to in our personal and professional lives.
Honor is the ability to operate in both our public and personal lives with the highest of ethics. It is the value that drives me to do the right thing no matter how difficult the decision may be. It helps me make choices in a manner that will ensure my integrity goes unquestioned because it is in the best interest of my family and our nation.
Courage is the ability to tackle difficult situations personally and professionally to make the best choices in the interest of the Navy and out Nation. It is my duty to lead by example to show what it means to live up to a higher standard of personal conduct in doing what is right in the face of adversity.
Commitment is the ability to follow through and complete the toughest of tasks, to never quit and take responsibility for any duties you are given. It means I will completely back and embrace Navy policy, to ensure every Sailor maintains a higher standard of excellence.
These are the Core Values that I will live up to and uphold that will make me a successful Naval Officer.
Thank you in advance!
This isnt a motivational statement for a STA-21 package, however I couldn't find a thread for OCS package personal statements. I have been periodically working on these statements for a couple months now and I would really appreciate some feedback and critiques. Please do not hold back.
I am applying for the Air Vehicle Pilot (7371) program this June.
PERSONAL STATEMENTS
1. For all applicants, including Nurse Corps, use the space provided to describe the following in detail (Limit your statement for each section below to between 200 and 250 words).:
- Reason applying for a commission
- Personal and professional goals
- Strengths/personal characteristics you possess which will contribute to success in the program(s) to which you are applying.
As a second-generation sailor, my life has been shaped by the values and principles that define the U.S. Navy. My father served a career as a SEABEE, and from him I have learned that the strongest leaders are tenacious in the face of adversity, uphold ethical standards, encourage innovation, and prioritize both personal development and the growth of others. I used these principles as an enlisted Sailor, and I can say with utmost certainty that it's the reason for my success in life. A commission will allow me to serve this country at my highest capacity, and to build leaders within the Naval Enterprise.
My personal goal is to provide the best possible life and security for my family, and to continue my educational career as a life-long learner. Professionally, I want the challenge and opportunity to shape the future of naval warfare as an Air Vehicle Pilot. I intend to strengthen the Navy's war fighting capabilities by employing Naval Doctrine and ensuring our continued dominance on the global stage.
The skills I have gained in ten years as an enlisted Sailor will undoubtedly translate into my success as an Air Vehicle Pilot, and as a Warrant Officer. I demonstrate sustained superior performance as a leader, mentor, and as a technical expert as evidenced by my meritorious promotion to FCPO against 119 highly competitive Sailors. I approach every responsibility with a sense of duty, and I will work relentlessly to ensure the success of the Navy and my fellow Shipmates.
2. Discuss what the Navy's Core Values (Honor, Courage, Commitment) mean to you and how you think they will apply to you as an officer in the U.S. Navy.
Honor, Courage and Commitment are the foundation of what it means to be a Sailor - without any of these founding principles, no one can have a successful career as a Naval Officer. They are the ideals we strive to live up to in our personal and professional lives.
Honor is the ability to operate in both our public and personal lives with the highest of ethics. It is the value that drives me to do the right thing no matter how difficult the decision may be. It helps me make choices in a manner that will ensure my integrity goes unquestioned because it is in the best interest of my family and our nation.
Courage is the ability to tackle difficult situations personally and professionally to make the best choices in the interest of the Navy and out Nation. It is my duty to lead by example to show what it means to live up to a higher standard of personal conduct in doing what is right in the face of adversity.
Commitment is the ability to follow through and complete the toughest of tasks, to never quit and take responsibility for any duties you are given. It means I will completely back and embrace Navy policy, to ensure every Sailor maintains a higher standard of excellence.
These are the Core Values that I will live up to and uphold that will make me a successful Naval Officer.
Thank you in advance!