Average Monke
A primate with internet access
Sure. What I mean is that the gist of your motivational statement sounds like "I want to be a Naval Aviator so that I can one day become an astronaut". What you are receiving is millions of dollars of government training and resources so that you can go do something entirely unrelated. If you were hiring someone, does that sound like someone you want to invest in? Else where in your statement you mention concepts like leadership and service, but your motivation comes off as entirely selfish. How do you intend to serve others an Naval Aviator? Hint: that's the part about wanting to be an officer.Can you elaborate a bit more in your third comment when you say:
This is besides the point, but there are probably more direct paths to becoming an astronaut than this route if that's you end goal.