Robby
Mmm... Butter Bars
I have not yet had this edited by others, so feel free to tear it apart and make corrections as needed. It's lengthy, but still does not fill the available space on the application. Sorry in advance if it is too wordy.
Serving my country is something that I have wanted to do for many years. Every July, my church hosts a Sunday morning service to honor those who have served and who are currently serving in the United States military. The 4th of July service has been a touching reminder of what the generations before me have sacrificed in order to ensure the safety and freedoms of today. When I look at the lives of the former military members, I see self-motivated men and women who take pride in their work. I believe it is no coincidence that many of the hardest working individuals in my church are former military members. This shows me that the military can instill a work ethic unmatched by civilian careers. It is this thought that inspired me to consider joining the armed forces.
Unlike many who apply for a commission, I have not known exactly what career path I wanted to take until recently. I decided to major in International Business after realizing that it would provide me with the most interesting opportunities. It was not long until I developed an appreciation for business management and recognized my desire to pursue a career in this field. As I neared graduation, I researched several companies and spoke with my career advisor, but I found it difficult to get excited about typical office jobs. My wife and I had continued to circle back to the military route until we finally realized that this is what best fits us. I have spoken to several friends and family members in the services and have carefully considered their advice. After looking closely at both the available jobs in each of the services and at the expectations of the officers, I have come to the conclusion that I am best suited as Navy Supply Corps Officer. My interest in business management and my ability to work efficiently with others will serve the Navy well.
I have been blessed with many opportunities to rise to leadership positions and have learned much from them. Leadership styles may vary greatly, but successful leaders realize the importance of effective communication. In my two years of marriage I have learned more about communicating than at any other time in my life. I could have read volumes about effective communication, but the true test was my relationship with my wife. The toughest lesson for me to learn was to clearly state my expectations without making any assumptions. This was a lesson not learned as a team captain, section leader, or group member, but as a husband. Effective communication is necessary for a Supply Corps Officer to ensure that goals are being met. I plan to use these skills as a Supply Corps Officer to not only ensure that jobs are being done well, but to also build and maintain close, professional relationships with others working with me.
I believe my leadership abilities will contribute to my effectiveness as a Naval Officer. Balancing many roles while meeting my goals with multiple groups has provided me with ample experience in working efficiently with others. I understand that Supply Corps Officers work alongside several others who have their own duties. I look forward to working in the fast-paced environment to which I am well accustomed.
My decision to join the Supply Corps is not one that is ill considered. I have looked closely at the Navy’s requirements and I understand the lifestyle that my family will be expected to live. My wife and I are prepared to face the hardships that may lie ahead. We look forward to the life as an officer and to proudly serving in the United States Navy. Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to apply for this position.
Serving my country is something that I have wanted to do for many years. Every July, my church hosts a Sunday morning service to honor those who have served and who are currently serving in the United States military. The 4th of July service has been a touching reminder of what the generations before me have sacrificed in order to ensure the safety and freedoms of today. When I look at the lives of the former military members, I see self-motivated men and women who take pride in their work. I believe it is no coincidence that many of the hardest working individuals in my church are former military members. This shows me that the military can instill a work ethic unmatched by civilian careers. It is this thought that inspired me to consider joining the armed forces.
Unlike many who apply for a commission, I have not known exactly what career path I wanted to take until recently. I decided to major in International Business after realizing that it would provide me with the most interesting opportunities. It was not long until I developed an appreciation for business management and recognized my desire to pursue a career in this field. As I neared graduation, I researched several companies and spoke with my career advisor, but I found it difficult to get excited about typical office jobs. My wife and I had continued to circle back to the military route until we finally realized that this is what best fits us. I have spoken to several friends and family members in the services and have carefully considered their advice. After looking closely at both the available jobs in each of the services and at the expectations of the officers, I have come to the conclusion that I am best suited as Navy Supply Corps Officer. My interest in business management and my ability to work efficiently with others will serve the Navy well.
I have been blessed with many opportunities to rise to leadership positions and have learned much from them. Leadership styles may vary greatly, but successful leaders realize the importance of effective communication. In my two years of marriage I have learned more about communicating than at any other time in my life. I could have read volumes about effective communication, but the true test was my relationship with my wife. The toughest lesson for me to learn was to clearly state my expectations without making any assumptions. This was a lesson not learned as a team captain, section leader, or group member, but as a husband. Effective communication is necessary for a Supply Corps Officer to ensure that goals are being met. I plan to use these skills as a Supply Corps Officer to not only ensure that jobs are being done well, but to also build and maintain close, professional relationships with others working with me.
I believe my leadership abilities will contribute to my effectiveness as a Naval Officer. Balancing many roles while meeting my goals with multiple groups has provided me with ample experience in working efficiently with others. I understand that Supply Corps Officers work alongside several others who have their own duties. I look forward to working in the fast-paced environment to which I am well accustomed.
My decision to join the Supply Corps is not one that is ill considered. I have looked closely at the Navy’s requirements and I understand the lifestyle that my family will be expected to live. My wife and I are prepared to face the hardships that may lie ahead. We look forward to the life as an officer and to proudly serving in the United States Navy. Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to apply for this position.
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). told parents want to fly (left grad school, turn back on full ride, may or may not have been a good choice)